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Chapter 1-6

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"Was it a plus one or two fire enchantments?" Fucking nerd

"While desperately looking around for a path to make my escape, I laid my eyes on a pile of objects on the ground, all my belongings. My bags full of blankets, clothes, my sword and other hastily grabbed relics from home." Where did this come from? I don't recall it being mentioned before here, and it isn't as though Laven had it on him when imprisoned.

You have some serious power creep in this story. Here an injured but mostly recovered Rose failed to take down a single opponent, but she is later described as having taken down near armies singlehandedly and is shown to have killed about a bargefull of HEROES while suffering far worse wounds. That's just my opinion though.

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