" “What a fine gathering of sisters we have today?”

“Hehe, that I do, Red.”" This isn't a response that makes sense.

"the one who was very obviously their leader. It didn't take me long to put a name to her. She was The Crone. The leader of this witch's Sabbath." generally redundant

"She was like Annie without the ginger curls." Speaking of Annie without ginger curls, how about that new black Annie remake?

"For this day will be the moment" The entire day will be the moment.